Not bad. Not bad at all...

Intro was certainly interesting and it got my attention quite welll cos i ust couldn't wait to hear how it'd continue. However, even though transition from intro to main melody wasn't that great, u did a good job of mixing the instruments together to get the great blend u have now.

Still, the background was a bit repetitive even though build up to the climax was great with a fantastic outro to top it all off.

Overall, this is a agreat piece of music but some negatives i mentioned got ur pts down to 8. Work more on this and u'll have urself a winner ;)

Darklight17
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Interesting introduction

Well, it's certainly a very good tune, but the introduction just feels so out of place, I couldn't even see them as being the same tune. It certainly fits the industrial genre and you've worked a very nice beat and melody into a powerful, robust little tune here.

I think that the melody could give way to the counter-melody slightly in places, or perhaps it's just an indication that you need to calm the counter melody down a little. I'm sure that sitting and puzzling through it will help with this, but I can't personally put my finger on which of the two variables needs changing.

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Slow intro, awesome song

Yeah, the intro is indeed too long and too slow. You may want to cut it down a bit, because the song that follows is actually pretty amazing. Very hard drums and melodies, I can imagine people would really like to dance to this in a disco. The song is full of energy and I guess it makes people want to dance.

So yeah, try to find a better intro. :)

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Ha, yeah the beginning made me wonder about how the end result of this song was going to be, but it actually ended up quite good. So the beginning was a tad bit slow like you already know, but it almost adds to the effect that you get when the song starts to kick off.

The song had a good amount of variety and was done very well. Congrats on the first upload and I've decided to help your score a bit as it was actually well below two before I voted. O.o

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