nice man!

great song... just some mastering errors....
when u have that filter going on ur percussion like at :37 it hurts my ears
turn down the reso and high pass on it
and there was some clipping.....
try using a limiter or turning down the volume.. or maybe just some simple EQing
i really enjoyed the lead! great concept and song!

YEah

not bat you must making most good than that.

Repetitive but not too bad

I could have done with a tune over the top of it, as it is it's fairly repetitive, but I did like some of the bits, especially when accompanied by that beat. There's not enough variation to this song.