WHAT THE

You just used fl loop-presets! You didn't write this melody!

Not bad

You do need some work, but I find it sounds amazing! And even if it is loops like some else said below, you still made them into a harmony so they sounded good.

just...boring

...nothing else to say...it's a low quality song

Mediocre at best...

Not too crazy about it...it is really obvious that this is all looped together. There are a lot of things that are wrong with it...and I sure as heck don't know how your song made it this far.

With that being said: don't let all our negativity get you down. Come up with something that is original; start with a simple melody, a bass line, what ever and then build!

Alright,

So you jam a bunch of premade loops together and make it to #15 of best tracks ever?

Sorry Newgrounds, I fucking quit.

I don't want to be completely negative with this review, I'll go ahead and suggest that you actually make your own material. That means NO presets. Don't take that as a personal attack, I'm simply suggesting that you don't claim another's work as your own.