PJ - Mournful Dreams (Updated)

PoyzenJam

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Fayde (PoyzenJam)

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Date Submitted

07/06/2009 | 03:54AM EDT

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Ambient Song | 4.7 MB | 4 min 9 sec

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Current Score

4.31 / 5.00

Score Rank: #18,005
Popularity Rank: #10,604

321 votes

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306 downloads

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Author Comments

ok, this is kindof an ambient/ chill hiphop beat.. its not done yet though, ill put up an updated version soon... just chill out and listen to this whole thing... try not to fall asleep its pretty relaxing, and gimme some feedback...
oh, and just out of curiosity, if you write a review, include what you think of when you hear this...
thanks, and enjoy
- PJ (Poyzen Jam)

- edit -
i added a background thunderstorm and rain, some wind.. some other minor changes.. also, now that i added all these extra sounds, it takes away from the hip hop beat, so its more of an ambient song now i guess...
just noticed the thunder was a bit loud in some parts and the ending has alot of rain... ignore that for now ill change it soon

- edit -
changed volumes on the thunder..

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Average Score: 9.4 / 10

Score: 8
SilenTree

"nice, but not perfect"

date: November 10, 2009

I won't lie to you, but this song really needs some vocals. I would look for some sexy female voice to this slow and relaxing music. anyway, I first thought it would be minor quality, but then I read that you got rain in the background - my suggestion: take the rain out of the main song and get it only at the end in.

but in the end the song's very good and I like it a lot

November 10, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks, if i decide to remake this, i would put some better sounding rain in too
some good matching vocals would be hard to find but its a good idea
thanks for the review

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Score: 10
xregnarpurex

"gives me chills man."

date: November 10, 2009

This is hell'a good. Damn do I like this...

November 10, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks
i made this a while ago so i was thinking of remaking a better version
i'll let you know when i do
but anyways, really glad you like it : )

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Score: 10
CartoonTeakettle

"Pretty cool"

date: November 10, 2009

Would be great in a game. If I knew how to make games, I would've used this song alot :P
Who knows? I might make a game some day.
I promise you, that if I ever make a game, I will put this song in it!

Since you asked for it, I'm gonna tell you what I think when I hear it.
Too bad I barely can't, I have no words that I can use to explain those feelings.

-CTeakettle-

November 10, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks man!
yeah that would be awesome
thanks for reviewing
really appreciate it

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Score: 10
EternalXIII

"great!"

date: November 8, 2009

This is a great chill beat! Thee rain sound adds to it's ambiance! Great work man!!

November 8, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks Eternal :D
glad you like it, your beats are pretty sick

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Score: 9
mike1084

"Lovely!"

date: November 8, 2009

It's lovely! The only thing that was too bad, was that it doesn't loop. Nonetheless, this is a great piece! I will most likely put it in the game I am going to work on. :D
If you are going to remake this, then I hope that you could make it so I can loop it. ;D

Now, you asked what I thought with this...

I imagine being in a forest... walking through it, the grass is wet, rain is falling down... it's a dark night, but a clear one.

Anyway, keep up the good work! 9/10 5/5. :D

November 8, 2009

Author's Response:

thanks!
i didnt intend it to be a loop, i wanted a beginning and outro
but im glad you like it, and hope you use it in your game

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