An opinion...

You certainly get to the point. This is an obvious statement, and while I agree completely agree with the 'just do your thing' approach, the end result is often half-baked. I realize that within a minute and 16 seconds' time it isn't easy to fit together a cohesive production, but short of that, at least some fancy footwork is needed to make it engaging at all. This is more of a segue track instead of an actual "song" and as such I would consider it high-end of mediocre, but it seems to be more along the lines of 'just your style'. To be blunt, it doesn't do anything interesting. If there were accompanying works to make up a more cohesive whole production-a family, of sorts-then I would find it far more listenable. I don't intend to be harsh, and I'm giving it a 4 to help compensate for the score, I just think it needs a bit of work. Keep it up!