You made the news just a little more interesting man. But the only thing that bothered me was the repeditive ending maybe you could of made it more than just beats at the end.
Just some thoughts,
Thanks for advice. I recorded that strange news cast and felt it needed to go over a dark beat. The intention is to write some lyrics that make fun of consumer culture i.e. the "merchandise kills people" although i feel for anyone who gets hurt or killed