Yes!!!

this is exellent! Id expect nothing less!
and this is your first time which is even more amazing
great chioce of sounds!

Yes...

This is a fantastic track,

The synths are all constructed perfectly, and they go with one another very well,
As far as song structure, the only thing I would change is adding a short 2 bar outtro, and fade out at the same time, that would help the track feel a lot more complete.

every thing in this track is fantastic. i would not change any thing except for the ending,, great job!

This was nice!

For your first time doing a rave, this was very...uh...ravey! ^.^

Good job, you can really grow and might become a featured artist once!

~DJ Galax

OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!

Dude, if this is your first tiem making a rave, then you should really keep going with it!! This is plainly the best song I've heard on NG. You keep improving by every song you make. Keep it up!!

P.S. I bet I will see this on top 5 soon :D