Love the synth
Hints & Tips:
A very loud song
Guitar recording is gross but you know this already
Synths are great, very soundscaping and dreamy
Drums - cymbals are great! Bass drum/snare drum get lost in the song, compress or tweak the volumes on the other parts to fix that or do whatever you do. Needs new volume mixing imo
Guitar seems to be the background rythem, but maybe that is your intention, it could do more but that could change stuff too much, maybe try it out, but it works as is.
The song is great all around, especially for a rough mix. It is overall kind of blurry sounding, but not to bad. An 8 as a matter of fact. Good work again.