Poetic
Very deep man. keep it up.
Beat by atomic-noodle titled "day to day"
this song was inspired last night by fellow rapper who I go way back with, ma boy Lil' D aka Shade da suspect
im on this swing
back n forth like a kid
I'm ready to jump
I'm jus full of shit
I cant take it anymore
the sun sets like my swing
I'm jus not on it for long
once i stayed in this dream i was in
I dont feel the pinch,
couldn't hold on, god let go,
ma swing begin to spin
I put ma foot on the ground
But I couldn't stop myself n
God's laughin, but i keep swingin
He said im scared to jump
1 day I'll show him
he who laughs last laughs loudest
n the sky will cry when i wake
so good morning son
n good night dreams
dont take me away
I jus lay awake
waiting for the day
The chain on my swing break
so god can accepts me
Everyday he rejects me
n im left alone in the cold
bathtub of this world
shaving wut i was
n bleeding wut i've become
I'm in over my head
think I'ma get off ma swing set
CHORUS
I have this song
I don't kno how it goes
but what I do kno
is life's heavy on the soul
So I take ma bike
N i got 1 knee pad on
ur at my side like
ur the 1 playing the song
I'm ready ride out of sight
So please let go at once
I ride with n for the light
no hands n no stunts
No brakes n a wall
I'm ready to fall
Think it's time to face it
never hit the ground
but i can surely taste it
It's a craving I got down
n i been hungry for a while
I got all ma signs,
beggin for a smile
Ma cup is half full now
I got ma common sense
But see ma conscience
can not be found
I lost it long ago
In a bet for my soul
I said I bet I could find
meaning in this world
All I needed was some time
I thought it was my girl
I'm now alone n dont mind
I lost it on the pavement,
payment over time
Loosing every part of mine,
look back I laugh at my sign
HAHAHA (fall)
Poetic
Very deep man. keep it up.
thanks=D glad u like it as much as i do=D
pretty good
overall a pretty good track man, the only thing i would do is try turning up the volume, it was kind of hard to hear what you were saying in your first verse. Good job man, "i have this song, i dont know how it goes" haha hell yeah man.
5/5
=D thanks man, glad you like it as much as my gf n I do
Very Nice Homie,
Good from start to finish.
Came from the soul n thats always the shyt!
Keep it up dowg.
Tight as ending
5/5
1o/1o
-OuT-
Aka. ShadeDaSuspect
thanks man=D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.