Well, this is my first upload-styled-thing. This is MY song, it was made completely from scratch using FL Studio 7. It's taken me many months to get this far and i may still add little tweaks here n there every so often, but since its startin to sound pretty good (to me) i thought id throw it up all over the interwebs and see what other people might think.

Enjoy, oh and if you hate it, constructive criticism is best.