Groovy

Again, like your other song, it had awesome aspects, and annoying aspects.

First off the things I didn't like or find annoying.

-I Found the very high synth that drifted in and out in the first minute or so incredibly annoying.

-The synth at like 1:25 needs to be louder, to add more effect.

-The synth that comes in briefly at 1:45 has some weird notes.

-The Weeh synth that comes in at 2:10ish is quite irrating, mabye an octave lower would be better.

Things I liked

-The trance synth in the background was awesome.

-The hihat sounded pretty cool throughout the songs.

-The low frequency synths were really cool.

Things to Work on in the future

I noticed in your other song, you used a snare roll at the intro of your song as well, also try a kick roll sometimes they sound really good (as in like 1 note per bar, then 2 notes, then 4, then 8, then 16) is a really good kick build up sometimes.

~Hope to see some more of your groovy work in the future!

4/5 8/10

~Happy Music Making -Squll

PS: What did you use to get that voice?