FL presets all over.
You seem to layer up many preset loops from fruityloops. Don't do that. A good technique to start creating songs when your new to this program is to slice beats and rebuild em. You will have matching samples, and it least it will be creative.
Also you didn't master the track.
If you need help on FL ask me. Scince I figure you are pretty new to this.
Hi I am new to FLStudio
do u think there is ene chance i could have ur msn??
thanks man i appreciate it