This is rather pleasant
I would like to hear a cleaner guitar, And the drums could stand to be a bit softer, but this song is great otherwise.
Author Comments
Finally a lengthy song.
Worked on this more than my average submission, but less than I should have. It's not exactly polished IMO.
I'm working on the guitar sections with a guitarist here on NG so excuse the sounds I'm currently using.
Generic verse-chorus-verse structure, wasn't feeling like experimenting much.
You could consider this a WIP if the other guy ends up doing his part and fixing up this song with better sounds.
Until then, I leave you with what I have. Enjoy~
GronmonSE responds:
Too hard for me to play, but yup, you're right.
Thanks for the review. Check out my other work sometime, there's no silly virtual guitars in it ;)
Great Piece
This is a really great piece. Strong emotion and very strong writing. As you said, this is a WIP and I will definitely re-review it when some of the MIDI is replaced, because I think that is the only thing holding this back from being a really highly-rated piece.
Well done.
good otherwise
the dissonance definitely isnt working in your favor.
pick a key
Not bad
Piano is really good and I would like to hear more of that cello or a violin, not sure what is it, but the drums and the "guitar" are kinda annoying, too loud and distracting. That moment at 1:22 reminds me of Disillusion, wich is a great thing. All in all not bad, but if I were you I would leave the drums out.
pretty good
Not bad, I can't really decide if I want to downlod it though. The first 30 seconds are boring to me.
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- 3 min 29 sec
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