Arrg...
I was gonna write down what I thought, but I decided to read the other reviews... Take there advice, sry I cant be original in this review. People beat me to it.
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Not really my best though, I see this song got some potential. But as always, I cannot fit those
gaps and flaws I've made so farr.. I could only improve it by mixing it better. So help is appreciated. ;)
Also I made it slightly progressive I think.
Rate and review fairly!
unrealdark responds:
I know. :(
Left this piece behind. Started to go on hardstyle, suits me better I gues.
It ended before it started?
Awesome intro, it drew my attention immediately. I think you should have just made it a little bit shorter (as in, progress to the next part at 0:25). There is not enough variation (and no beat) to validate making it that long.
The beat is maybe a bit overpowered. I don't know if this was your intention but you can barely hear the part you started out with.
At 2:55 I was expecting a massive buildup which would continue into your base melody (which starts at 1:39) plus another high pitch (fast) melody on top; that would have been great :-). Sadly it already started to build off from that point.
I guess this explains my title. I was expecting more after hearing the intro which is really awesome :-). Extend the song! This song really needs another melody.
The review might sound a bit harsh - but you're still getting an 8 for originality. Great work!
unrealdark responds:
First off all, your review is not harsh! I need these kind of reviews more often!
I get your feeling near 2:55 it starts to build off from there, perhaps I'll make this song a little bit longer with a faster sub melody above it as you described. It actually is a great idea! The beat is indeed overpowering this song, however it whas not really my intention to do that. I'll keep these pointers in my head, and will work them out in the final piece. (if there's going to be one.)
Thanks for the [constructive] review! Appreciate it.
the ending cut off too quickly
but other than that i dont think theres much else wrong with it
the title got my attentoin for shure. also a little something that poped in my head while listening to this
when your told not to say something thats important to you on pain of death, wich would you choose? would you say what you meen despite your life being forfiet, or do you remain silent to save yourself?
I personly say let you voice be heard make them see you light before they turn it off.
p.s. hope you dont think this is odd lol
unrealdark responds:
Ending could use some work yeah. Odd? No not at all, I would choose for telling the important message despite I would get killed. In life it matters to tell your opinion, if you don't you will be sorry for the rest of your life. (Atleast in this live or dead question). Thanks for the review, and your phillosophy question! ;)
First to Review, First To Vote... MAX.
Fantastic, The Intro Kept Me On Line Till The Rythms, Which I Decide Is Awesome... And Truly Have Potetial. Its Just Epic, Epic. Epic.. Epic.... Eeeeeppiiiiiccccc.........
unrealdark responds:
Wow.. well devined EPIC review here lol! :D
I'll try to make it more epic as it is now in the finished version. ;)
Thanks for the review!
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