Nice...

I remember the REAL original version.

First off, the panning annoys the fuck outta me. Don't get me wrong, I've done a lot of panning effects in my music. But to have everything on one side of the field for so long is EXTREMELY annoying. Either change it, or add another instrument to balance it a little.

The guitar part is interesting, and pretty well written. It flows very well musically and sounds well on it's own. So adding more instruments should only enhance this tune greatly.

Really, there isn't much more for me to comment on. It is only a demo, and it is really transparent at the moment.

2/5 and 4/10 overall, for now anyways. ;-)

Good start bud.

-Gravey-