don't....

send yourself down, there is lot of stuff here you can use for your music, I might say if there wasn't for that off tune touch you put, this would be real nice.....

very nice

you picked the strangest of keys to play in.
i know this because i have perfect pitch.

and i know its not the instrument you're playing because you don't play piano.
and keyboards don't need tuning.

Uhhh

I mean it is improvised but the melody is all over the place even improvs have some sort of structure as you go along.

Also you could have used the chords better to give it more feeling and a better sound.

Idk what else but i dont want to hurt yours score too much but i have to give u a 4 max cuz this isn't very good as you said. Im not trying to sound harsh thats is just what i think. 4/5 7/10

you seriusly IMPROVIESED that?!?!?!?!

well, if it wasn't an improv as you said more like a 7. but i like it. it is soothing and

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sorry, i overelaxed and fell asleep listening to it and my face hit the keyboard. XD

nice. i haven't listened to your other stuff yet. but if this is what you can do unedited and unplanned, i am foaming at the mouth for anything more you did.

We can't expect much from improvisations

but i must say you've made a quite good job