Score: 10

"Fantastic"

by: RMWJ

date: October 15, 2009

All i can say is god do i love this song

Score: 9

"Big O"

by: Soullink

date: July 21, 2009

So you remember Big O at all? It's an anime where Dorthy, an android and Roger Smith, a negotiator of sorts, must solve the worlds problems etc. She's got an affinity for piano though. The only catch is, she's a robot so though the piece is amazing when she plays it it feels like it's missing something.

So what does all that mean? Your piece is complex. It dances but where it should be light, where it should breathe, where it should slow down, it cannot. Fire Dorthy. lol.

Being that I have a natural ear for music as I do play and compose myself I can see what you're trying to convey. The movements are relevant, the progression is there, but breathing needs to occur. Sometimes it's okay to let something hang over. Allow for a bit of silence during the song. It can build as much anticipation as a run does.

Personally, I do like the piece, but I would love for you to play it, or some one to actually play it on the piano. Take the sheet music and add in tempo changes, dynamics, write out the emotions the movements that you were trying to convey and give it to a pianist and see what happens. I would love to hear someone play this. The emotions they would infuse in it would surely bring this up to a ten.
P.S.
Stuck with just finale so I know how ya feel. lol

Score: 6

"synthetic"

by: broove

date: April 15, 2009

Dude! Change the velocity and tempo sometimes. All your piano songs sounds extremely synthetic. You do have skills, but try to improve them with every song.

Score: 10

"Talent"

by: G-888

date: March 1, 2009

I like it its really good piano

Score: 9

"Niiiiice..."

by: Gravey

date: February 26, 2009

Being a pianist myself, I am definitely drawn to songs like this one. Now my only question is, can you play it for real? Because if so, then that would really make me smile. :-)

As for the piece itself, it is pretty nice. I like the intricate melody lines. But I think the constant runs can become cumbersome after a while. I do like it when the left hand does a run every now and then. Help to break up the monotony of it.

The chord structure is nicely written. Although it is not extremely complicated, it is good. I would add some other instruments to it as well. But that is just m. It is still pretty nice as it is.

You should throw some heavier reverb on it in my opinion. That would give it a little more flavor as a whole.

4/5 and 9/10 overall. Nice work here.

-Gravey-