The drums destroys the "Ambience"

The drums are WAY too loud, the bass drum even causes clipping in the sound, which is NEVER good in any song. Also the lower bass notes of the choir Together with the much too loud bass drum creates a really nasty reverb, which isn't too good either. i know I've said it before, but you really need to create dynamics with your drums. because of the zero-dynamic drums, you can't make transitions in your songs, and a song NEEDS transitions to live.

I really like the chords you're putting together, but again: don't hesitate to do more than just one loop that keeps going, and going, and going.

nice

This is a nice song.
Though its too noisy to be ambient, and too quiet to be industrial.

the song itself is nice. Did a good job with it.