Very nice
Like a mix between a rave and a children's tv programme. The lullaby esque sound was very strange and enchanting but overall I really liked it. Great tune, good work
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Author Comments
Makes me think of someone in need of saving... someone who needs help in a desperate time.... Finally gets the help... But eventually he/she and then it gets passed along to another person who needs help just like the last.... Everyone needs a hand so why not lend one?
~§in§
SinZLazTWordZ responds:
Haha... Hmmm i guess it could work for a childrens tv program... i dont watch too many of them so i wouldnt know xD Thanks for the review
SinZ
Good feelings
I think that this tune certainly has an air of making me feel really good about myself. I think for a proper Trance anthem, you need to increase the beat speed, as it's too slow for this sort of thing. At the moment, you're gunning more for ambient.
I think that the tune is nicely balanced, with a good length, but you could certainly stand to loop it though, as it would make the tune even better and give it a longer shelf life.
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SinZLazTWordZ responds:
Yeah.... i agree its a bit slow il make sure next time i get everything perfect before uploading =]
SinZ
pretty good
the transition from the synths to the piano around 1:45 was well placed as the synths had just started to become repetitive by then, and other than the abruptness of the ending there is nothing wrong with this song, try an fade out or a slow removal of instruments from the main beat, keep at it
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SinZLazTWordZ responds:
Yeah i was told this :D Im working on it... this was uploaded before i got too many reviews on the other song and they said it was good :D haha but thannksss il remember that next time
SinZ
Good job.
I thought that the author comments you had to describe the song were very interesting as it's probably not what I would have thought of while listening to this song, but the further it got into the song the more I guess I could see imagining the situation. The song was pretty good and it had a pretty cheerful mood to it, which was the original reason why I was confused why this would be about someone in the need of being saved, but then I thought about what the music may sound like if the person had been given a helping hand and what their mood would then be like. I didn't mind the abrupt ending at the end of the song. It could of had a bit of work, but it didn't hurt the submission too much. Maybe you could of used a fade out or something like a sequence that just sounded good towards the end of the song, which ended on a final note.
C52
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SinZLazTWordZ responds:
Thanks for the review... And yes you have to listen to it and read what i said to understand fully... Im not starting the chain here in this song but merely passing it along to another person. So instead of making it sound like a fairly gloomy song that goes toward the happier side of life i decided to make it where someone has already been helped and is now helping another person and even though he cant be helped anymore he is still having his fun helping other people move toward there goals!!
~§in§
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I like the slow pace of the song. I also like how you slowly build up the main beat during the intro. At first all we can hear is some hissing sound and then it gets more and more clear and suddendly you present us this nice melody.
Only thing that isn't so good is the ending. The song just stops on the last note. I was hoping for something smoother here (maybe a fade out).
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SinZLazTWordZ responds:
Yeah... im still new to techno and all.... but im working on it and getting better progressing myself.. Hopefully il be releasing some new stuff soon. Sort of a "writers" block. Cant seem to come up with anything much. But thanks for the review and il be sure to fade out or have a more dramatic ending =]
~§in§
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