Not bad.
Nice drums & bass! They suit the mood of the song pretty well. :)
The only thing I would suggest would be to stop using FL Studio or Vanguard presets. Everyone uses them. Try making your own. It's more fun than going through a damn list to find a sound.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you please check my latest song, Once Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks! :D