its...
reallly good i like it but its a bit to fast...
and yer you are right about the guitar.......quiet amazing
keep em comin n gd work
*.*.*Sarah*.*.*
Author Comments
My second attempt at Fruity Loops. Got rid of the stupid static and started messing with Sytrus, then this happened. Sorry for the imbalanced volume with the guitar part. I recorded the moving parts live, and I couldn't get the volume to line up perfectly, so it sounds much louder when I'm playing live. Let me know what you think.
Update: Woo! 1,000 listens! Thanks to all for the reviews and votes!
slappmedoo responds:
Glad you liked the guitar part and thanks for the positive review. You think it's too fast? Wish I had known that while I was recording it :P
WOW!
This is great! Even though it's your second song, I'd say you knew what you were doing. This is great! I love the guitar riffs man! Did you actually play them on a guitar or use a piano roll?
For a critiquing, a change in drum rhythm but keeping the same feel would be nice. You know, some variety rather than the same drum loop over and over.
Fav part was 1.32 or somewhere in there. Also, learn how to do volume Automation Clips. Just go to the help menu and type in Automation Clips. This will enhance your songs by leeps and bounds. Also, help fix problem with too loud of recorded guitar... All in all, a great song! Keep it up!
Keep it REaL,
UMSL
10/10 5/5 [3.84 / 5.00 (+ 0.22)]
slappmedoo responds:
Thanks for the feedback. I'm still new to Fruity Loops, so I haven't learned all the features yet. This is kind of a concept song, so some of these melodies might pop up later. I was thinking about that drum beat, but I got so focused on the other parts, I just left it as one pattern for most of the song. And yes, I'm playing that guitar part live on a keyboard hooked into the computer. It took me around 15 tries to get it just right. Thanks again!
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- Apr 3, 2008
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- Drum N Bass
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- 2.3 MB
- 2 min 32 sec
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