Smoothing riding

Great! I love how you worked the melodies and the beat to make this creepy ^___^

=The Good=
-Great selection of instruments, strings work great together to add some creepiness
-Like your drum samples
-Rap-able indeed

=The Bad=
-Not much. I don't think it came into suddenly, you had 1 bar of a drum beat to transition into the main beat and there was enough buildup IMO
-Ending wouldn't be a bad idea, unless if you're trying to make it loop
-To fill a void, put a dark sounding, slightly detuned piano in here, although this wouldn't be needed if there was vocals
-EQ some more subbass to the bass strings

Ideas: 8.5/10 Diversity: 7.5/10 Clarity: 9/10
Will I listen to Again: Well it's not my style, so no. But this will a be a treat for many rappers ^___^ nice style, keep it going!