I have to agree with N0E0G0A. It would be awesome if you did a bass solo or something -- that's just me though. BUT then I thought... Holy crap, where'd this come from? I love it! You totally should finish this -- it needs some more love. Keep this stuff up -- we need more music like this here! :D

So lively, so much happiness ! So much JOY ! This song is like a sunshine, bright and shiny, warming up my heart. I may exagerate a little. BUT ! I put 5 stars for the feeling of blossoming I get from this song ! Even if I think it needs to be longer. Your song is incomplete, if you can make it speak with the same enlightment it does during 2 minutes more, this song would be so great ! The bass ! The bass has to have it's own little part in the song, it's funk ! Like.. At 0:37 Everything stops, I thought like : "owe, it's gonna be the bass part" but then no, the song just restart. This little bridge of bass would have made the song so smoothy ! (just my opinion)
I LOVE this (short) song, thank you so much !

Oh my goodness! I found what I want to use for my demo reel, may I?