WARNING, DOUCHE BAG BELOW THIS REVIEW
at least you can mix some shit up, and this is good. keep up mixin and keep up the beats.
peace V_(^_^)
Author Comments
A little sample of my newest project. I gotta add some instruments, it'll be a lot longer. I messed around with filtering effects and other stuff, hope you guys like it.
***3/16/08***
re-uploaded with more work, but still not complete. I still need to make another piano loop n a few other things.
SIDE NOTE: Bass is very intense, sub woofer recommended. Also, depending on the sub woofer you have, change your EQ to treble(i set mine to that) and turn the knob that should be somewhere on the sub woofer(mine has a knob) all the way up. You get a deep, clean bass and loud, clear vocals, so I get the best of both worlds, you can too^^.
sample taken from Fat Boys- Stick'em
the song sampled the sample that i took from the song. Got it? lol
Another SIDE NOTE: It's so hard to sample vocals(make accapellas), I was up for hours tryin to get samples from many different songs and i could only get one good one so far.
**3/17/08**
the ending was cut off, I've fixed that.
***March 31, 2008***
submitted the final song yesterday, put this address in ya address bar and listen to it, only 9 votes on it at the moment, so it's obviously a little low because of the R&B haters, but all you people who love R&B can help me bring this to the top of the R&B list.
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/134026
Too repetitive and overpowering a melody.
I like what you have here, but it's too repetitive.
The piano has a nice vibe, but it's way too repeptitive and dull.
The drums are great and I noticed a few minor variations, but it's the piano that's really in the foreground.
I liked the way you killed the harder beats/melody before the sample and seems like you're technically skilled with the software. (Far more than I, anyway.)
I just feel like the repetitive melody makes it all really boring to listen to.
Btw, the full tune was cool, but I reckon the melody remains too simple, repetitive and overpowering.
Sounds good
This is really good stuff. It sounds very good to me. I really loved the piano... That's easily one of my favorite instruments in any song. This mainly isn't a 10 only because it's a sample, and thus should be treated as such. I really appreciated how you made the music fade out at the end, instead of just coming to a screeching halt without warning, which I'm sure a lot of people hate.
Overall, good work, I'm looking forward to the finished product.
|RRC| Review Request Club
Good, but needs more
Okay, while I might have set the bar a little on the high side this morning, I can see that this tune is a very good one. I'd have considered adding more vocals, because that sample is great near the start, but it could go further and actually have lyrics.
A good beat, nice piano work and a decent length have given this song the best possible start - I'd suggest that you work on it, as you've laid good foundations.
[Review Request Club]
Good
Nice song, the beat and piano worked really well together, I would've liked to have heard some more diverse lyrics perhaps, it just seemed to lack that killer edge. But it was great, I can see alot of potential here.
=Review Request Club=
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