Well, its not amazing, but it IS 100% original. :D
More time was spent on the bass line than anything. So, if you have good bass, then you'll probably appreciate the submission more.
*Update - I made improvements and re-submitted it. Hope you like it better now. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. I have decided to keep making improvements until it's awesome; I would really like to put this in my professional portfolio. :)
*even MORE update - I made a lot of changes besides changing the volume on the percussion, I changed some of the instruments and their sound output. I use post effects on many of the channels, and made filter changes. Hopefully I can make it to 5.
Tone down the bass!
Can yo tone down the bass a bit, it would sound much better. Also the beat is quite repetitive but you come up with good beats. Thought I don't like the bass even if I have half the bass turned on on my speakers(that's my default, actually.)
So this was not bad but there is still room for improvement like more industrial space sound varieties. That's all.
Quite nice
Major volume uppage needed on percussive instruments. Kick and snare are too hidden but melody etc is nice. Instruments are over-used as the FL standard but you made it sound at least a little original, good work =]
Check out some of my stuff too if you like.
-Aidan.
Thank you for the input. I am updating this constantly, so give it another listen.
As for alternative instruments, what do you think would sound the best?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
hetecro 
