Simplistic
So I found this piece to be pretty simplistic but thats what I really liked about it and it's not overdone either there's a small twist in there that keeps it interesting too so as for any kind of improving moments I would suggest making it longer just a tad longer because it really is some solid work and I love the vibe and flavor this gives off but anyways keep up the amazing work you have prepared here
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this one longer
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