Well I enjoyed it for the most part
I am giving you a 9/10 because you expressed your feelings through music and did a damn good job my friend... It makes me glad to know that you found a constructive way to let out your emotions... Although.. friend if you really are having troubles with someone emotionally wise you might want to give her this song with the description... Who know maybe you will win the heart of that person... Anyways I like it and it made alot of sense so keep up the good work...
9 of 10 Hell yeah
Appreciate it but this was one of the scenarios where it was best to let her go..
isee u were trying to go for someting new, and different. i can sorta get that. but i feel like u kno ur goal, but not doing the right thing to get it done well.
all it in all, it wasnt too great. i wouldnt really consider this techno either, not because of the piano, cuz i think piano (when used the right way) can really bring out the liveliness of techno.
i notice that u have already sited ur own flaws. thats good. but if ure jsut the type of person with a different type of view to techno, then keep doing it. cuz theres always roomfor improvement.
yeah I know its not really techno.. It would probally fit more into a trance category or misc.. but the only problem is I like my songs to be reviewed so I can better myself as a muscian.. If i put this in a rock cateogry it would be bashed.. because Im a rocker myself and I used to think this way.. most rockers think anyone using a computer to make music isnt real and its fake and worthless.. I used to think the same thing till I tryed it and realized its just as compicated because now theres no excuse for playability reasons since the computer never messes up..
Piano and Strings have always been a good compliment to each other and I used them because it just brings alot of emotion just from those instruments.. both very pretty sounding instruments but way different in tone....
I appreciate your review and your honestly.. if someone doesnt like something I make I want them to tell me and tell me why.. I dont like the ppl that review my stuff and say Thats sweet sounding dude.. heres a 10.. I want to earn a 10 ya know but ppl on newgrounds throw 10's way too easily
It is really not that good, maybe it's just not what I was looking for, I just think it's too bland. But it does sort of make sense with the whole "breakdown" thing, it's just to quiet.
It probally doesnt because its not really a standard song.. like I said in the decription its not a set chorus,verse type pattern.. I understand you being lost but I kinda wrote out what just came out if that makes sense and this was the end result with some tweaking obviously..
The piano seemed really bland...Obviously it is a generator that is used to make those sounds, you should try making the piano blend in more, it would make the piano sound more authentic, and better in my opinion. The rest was alright I guess. There are a lot of things to improve here.
I didnt use a generator here dude.. I right everything out by hand.. The only time I ever use generators is for Arpeggios and thats normally with Synth leads for faster paced techno.. I translate my guitar work into the piano on these slow songs since I cant record my guitar to my computer anymore.. but all the piano stuff is writin by me note for note.... I was in band and also in alot of garage bands.. I know quite a bit about musical theory but dont know alot.. so the piano would really be me playing guitar if this were real
A whole Life Crisis in 3 mins and 52 seconds BRAVO MY MAN!!
lmao thanks... Idk if i would call it a crisis though lol
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