So, Envy sent me a few measures of a piano piece awhile back, but said he wasn't going to finish it. However, I felt that it needed to be finished, so I played around with the tune for awhile and came up with this. Personally, I think this is my best work so far, but I always think all my new work is my best. I paid particular attention to flow and feeling, so I hope it comes across well. Also, I hope the volume is a good place to be. It was a little quiet at first, so then I brought it up a bit. I really like being able to add more comments!
Constructive criticism is really appreciated, though any comments in general are nice. I'll respond to them all.
EDIT 1/21/08: I made the dynamics slightly more noticable and made it feel more natural. Because I felt like it.