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Fog-worn Path

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Probably not as great as I could have made it, but I just don't know what else to do with it... Overall a decent piece. I tried focusing more on chords and how the (in real life) left and right hands would work together. Oh, I wish I could play this :P Picture a fog covered path, and the different things you might see at different places, at least that's what this song does for me.

Constructive criticism appreciated!



I like this one, for the most part. I like that you tried to make it more like a realistic piano. If you really want it to be lovely, you should experiment with changing the tempos as well as the dynamics. Ooh that part at 1:40 is so wonderful. Anyways, I would highly recommend that you just mess with speeding up a few beats-per-second in some places and slowing down in others. This also might be a piece to try slowing down a bit altogether...but it's hard to tell. Lovely piece. Do you have sheet music for these songs?

Valtrix responds:

Thanks. Making realistic piano in Fruity Loops is pretty hard sometimes. Thanks a lot for that tempo changing idea...I sometimes completely forget about that while using Fruity Loops just because of how it's set up.


The piano was good, and I can see you tried hard to make it sound realistic etc but at some parts the song 'fumbled' a bit so it didn't flow well enough. Quite good but I think a bit of strings in the baackground to add a creepy feeling with low, heavy drums rumbling would be good as extras.

Valtrix responds:

Yep, definitely understand where you're coming from. These songs I've been working on with piano just to help hone my melody-building skills, because I don't want to get too stuck with more technical aspects right now.

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Credits & Info


3.85 / 5.00

Feb 5, 2008
11:57 PM EST
File Info
2.6 MB
2 min 53 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.