Score: 10
"Better than what I can do"
date: October 5, 2009
This song is great. I suggest having the end of the song having a fade out or have another descending note (at the really end), because in this song, at the end, the music fades for a bit, then gets cut off, making our brain think that there is more to this song. It's like going up a major scale and stopping at a Major 7th but on a smaller degree.
Other than that, this is another good work of art especially if this is just a rough draft.
