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It is the work which expressed internal waking of a girl affectively. A story is left to those who see.

- by itself, it was able to improve -- although I consider, the point examining itself has the unripe writing of a background.
- It has newly begun writing a scene for the image made in the past so that music might be suited edit and if needed.

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The animation was nice...I give you credit for that. The song was nice too but the problem is that the lyrics of the song just dont work with the flash. The song is beautiful but it conflicts with what youre trying to express and that just leads to unhappy viewers.
Considering the fact that the author's in Japan, maybe he misheard the lyrics...? but i suggest another song...

it sucked

i love haina's songs includeing this one but the animation didnt have anything to do with it for onething the song is about a boy. maybe u should have used hania's the girl from memory planet at least u could say the character was the same...

The animation did not go with the song.

You get the six stars only because the animation was decent.
This song is a sad song not a happy one. The animation you made was definitely a happy one with the girl flying free. In my opinion you made this animation first and then later tacked the song on it. The girl is flying free and happy when the song says "Can you hear the pain beating in his heart" It just doesn't fit at all.

A good flash.

This was a somewhat off type of flash. The music was beautiful, but the animation did not play to that tune. I couldn't really get into it with the fast motions, and sudden changes without a transition. Maybe fuse some of the scenes together to make it smoother. The beginning was alright, along with the earths hovering around. The animation was sub-par, unless it was intentionally made that way, then it still needs some work with fluidity of the movements for characters and moving objects. Keep at it!



i like your drawing style

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4.44 / 5.00

Nov 18, 2007
12:21 AM EST