Color

Yeah I will have to agree with you that this does need some color even just parts of it colored would be nice and what kind of paperbor canvus did you put this on it was different then the normal. But really. Anyways nice efforts here good style just needs some color into this so that's an idea for you to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color or part of it

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Apart from the one spike that doesn't look like a spike without shadow, the basic-line-art version of this is pretty cool too! Simple. Stylish.

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Very cool.