So in this one you bring some nice dtail in this sketch I like the yellowish paper too but I am thinking you should run some color through this with have bright colors to really bring out the full fliud energy of this whole piece you really have some nice talent here keep up the great efforts and sketch's
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Adding some color would be a plus here
At least NOT on my team, you mean? :P Good sketch!
XD I had the text right at first and then I changed it for some reason :D
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