needs a bit more

I rlly love the message behind this piece, I think u succeeded with shading and colour. The few things that could use work would be the foreshortening, but that could just be the style i dunno. The drapery on his shirt bothers me, it almost looses it's direction and there for makes the figure look stiff. But like I said it's only those things that could have been executed much better. Other than that the illustration depicts a good narrative.