A nice little comic piece too you have here very nice work on the characters I like this one
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A nice little comic piece too you have here very nice work on the characters I like this one
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Beside the artwork being very well done (I like the simplicity), I give this five stars because of how well it flows. My eyes instantly fell upon the appropriate dialog everytime they moved across the artwork and the punchline is executed spot on. I find this is often missed even in today's more popular comics. This is one of the more complex portions of comic writing and yet the most under-appreciated. For this you get five stars from me.
Thanks!
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