you gave him a sword, a cape, a flaming hand and your calling him red phoenix. that is exaggeration. make the character more simple stop trying to do what other people do. make this your character now someone else's overdone idea.
you gave him a sword, a cape, a flaming hand and your calling him red phoenix. that is exaggeration. make the character more simple stop trying to do what other people do. make this your character now someone else's overdone idea.
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