Zero's too out of character
A nice animation (Though the sucked into other games theme seems to have been a bit overdone, but I can forgive that)...however, I found Zero's swearing to be VERY offputting, and it seems very much that you only put it in to be hip. I thought about and I just couldn't see Zero swearing. THAT is what lowers your score, though I don't think you have a bad flash. Keep up the good work man...just work on your scripts a little more.