Not bad.
Surprising that you did this all by ear. Nice job with that.
However, there is a HUGE jump in dynamics in the beginning. It's over exaggerated. Meaning.. It's really soft one moment, then just jumps to loud.
Very midi-esque, but not a bad job at all. The song kind of lacks variation, but it can potentially be a great song.
i was using a new sound recorder, and i turned volume down by accident :(. THx for the help tho :D
Well...
I gotta give you credit, if you did this on a piano, it shows skill. Reviewing the song itself, it's pretty good, feels kinda march-y. As for being true to the original, it's...in the same key, amirite? Sorry for the low score, but it's not exactly accurate. A good effort, but try doing original songs for the "Classical" category, I think it'd turn out solid.