no good
I cannot start to say where you screwed up. Your graphics were no good, the style sucks, i hate the song, bad violence, and it was not the least bit funny. I can tell you one thing though. It reminded me of 'Dragon Ball Z' when it came up and showed their faces but, in a ****y way. I don't know if this is your first or last, it is no good and doesn't deserve the right to be shown unless you are waiting for even more humiliation. I am sorry, that was harsh but nonetheless true.