Hmm
There is no plot is this Flash. There really wasn't any humor or horror, or anything for that matter, thrown in. The animation was terrible, and the sound quality needed some work. Try to improve, and submit another Flash once your skills have improved.
~CelestOrion
Keep trying.
Like your previous videos the graphics were bad, the sound was bad, and it had no plot. Keep trying youll get the hang of it eventually. I would download a program that makes the graphics in your vids better.
DuskDDR MASTER
9/26/18 UPDATED REVIEW:
Ok so this still sucks but I now know you can't download better graphics. So we all have much to improve on. Keep it up!