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Reviews for "Theattack(duel)"

well not bad

not bad alot better then first one well make em walk god and it is winner not winna! and keep it up guy!

Dxkpower responds:

thx alot thats my past movie dude i can make em walk ino its winner dont hae hearth attack gosh man thx ny way

Well.

You have recieved your last bit of help from me. I warned you that any further childish actions would result in this, but you're apparently too much of a kid to understand that. So all movies you create from this point on will be done on your own. Don't ask me for help.
I don't mean to sound like such a prick, but if the entire viewing audience thinks it sucked, you can't bash them and bad mouth them. Doing that is insulting pretty much every person that has watched and will watch any of your movies. It's annoying, rude and very childish.
This "fuck u" and "ur stupid" stuff has gone on long enough. You had your warnings.

Dxkpower responds:

I dont need your help any more i learned all i needed and if u have nothing good to say dont say it in a reveiw...

**YAWWWN**

I... also have to be honest... that was pretty damn boring, and not too good... all it consisted of was some little sprites moving round 'hurting' each other... no where near as good as your other flashes... but overall, i didnt like or dislike it, just found it a bit boring... the music definately helped the movie, without it, im not sure it would have got a score above 2... so newayz, a NORMAL movie...
(THE THUMB: sideways)

Dxkpower responds:

this is just my second movie and i did not know how to do shit back then thx any way dude

Good Idea

The movie wasn't all that bad. I liked the idea; kinda funny how it was the same person fighting. I know that yr a newb, so it was pretty good for you. A couple things that would be good for next time would be:
1) Have them meet up before the fight as a kind of intro thing.
2) Add sound effects like sword classhing and battle cries.
3) make the characters move a lil faster, however, maintaining the fluidity.

Anyway.. that's my two cents. But as it stands, the movie kinda sucks right now.

Oh, and if you are going to reply to this, please use propper grammar.. or something. Your gramma is atrosious.

Dxkpower responds:

i am no noob as much now but this was my second flahs animation so give me credit i no it was all that bad but still i will adter duel w/e i forget last one it hingk make a big intro and i dont care about my spelling in reviews

It does show potential...

...but there's three things you have to do before this becomes acceptable:

(1) Compress the song or put up a smaller background music file. I'm guessing your flash is over 2000k because of the song you've got attactched to it, and it really doesn't do much for your movie. Yes, you need music, but it's not necessarily a great fit with your movie, and it shouldn't cause your movie's download time to quadruple.

(2) Add sound effects. Swords, 'n spells, 'n such.

(3) Animate your sprites when they move and make your animation smoother.

If you sacrifice your bgm quality for a better fps rate, animated sprites, and sound effects, this could be a good flash.

Dxkpower responds:

First of all i have no clue wat ur sayin second cant make effects yet im still a newb at that point 3 thx at least u told me what to fix