It was good but...
Try compressing the file, I mean for a 30 seond movie that was long, I don't mind I have cable it's just that other are still stuck with 56 K:) great job keep up the good work, and remeber compress your files in order to make NewGrounds a better place for flash
this movie could be...
this movie could be amazing but 4000Kb:s...
THAT SUCKS!
Letdown
10 seconds? Sorry but you would have to blow my mind in that amount of time to get above a three, and you didnt even show a real animation. Other reviews are right, the size leads you to believe something, and the movie lets you down. Try giving more to your audience.
Dude...
... this could be about 300kb. Set your audio to "stream" instead of "event", because this was a ridiculously huge file for the ten seconds of stuff you showed.
visually pleasing...very very short
the graphics and everything are quite nice, but it's short...kinda like having sex with a really hot girl, then prematurely ejactulating...come on, at least put in some more filler to it
other than that
cheers, and maybe work on your longevity ;)