Hmmm...
Not being harsh or anything but I didn't really like it all that much. It has good potential to become something much better but It didn't change much at all. It flowed really well, but I couldn't really get interested in the song, it wasn't catchy enough. That's what needs to be worked on, is to grab the listeners attention.
I give you credit for good skills in making the song 'flow' but overall I found the song a little dim/dull. I am not saying the song is terrible or bad, I just think that it needs a little work...