No work need, but make it Userfriendly
As ur last reviewer said, reaction needed to be slower and have better save points. i guess he didnt beat it cause i did but its true. u need to make the save points less repetive work because it get boaring. ur story line was alittle sorry, and go back and check spelling...and use of grammer :). i think u messed up on some wife part near the end. But i definitly didnt like the text story near the end. improve on that