Great idea, but you could add punchier snare, mix your basses bit more (e.g. Distrortion, OTT, stereo-widener, EQ muddy frequencies about 200-300 Hz and some cool FX) :))
And the sub is bit too loud btw.
Reviews for "Black"
Repetitive and a slightly empty. Also, the snare is really quiet and too soft for this song.