Dissapointing
I would prefer to see it more like the original. More lines and a squarer shape. He's too round. And the glasses aren't meant to be orange. You put too much detail into it as well.
Reviews for "Tankman"
Occluded responds:
I appreciate a good critique, but don't grade me on what you want to see. I can't paint to your tastes. I have to paint to mine. This is my reinterpretation of a Tankman. If you want the original why wouldn't you just look at the original? And what would be the point of just redrawing something that already exists?
Some issues
For one thing the perspective is kind of screwed. His right arm, [from the viewers perspective, his left arm] is longer than his left arm [from the viewers perspective, his right arm] when from the perspective trajectory, it should appear shorter because it's further away from the viewer than his right arm is.
I could understand that if he was slouching to his right, but his position doesn't indicate that at all. The illustration would be perfect if it weren't for that.
Above all the glamour of the coloring, it's nothing to be excited about. Especially when the backgrounds are comprised of elements from 3D software.
Occluded responds:
WARNING TO EVERYONE:
DON'T EVER REVIEW THIS KID.
Unless you want every single piece you've done reviewed as some sort of crazy revenge. He doesn't really know what he's talking about, and he'll put up the pretense of being constructive so he can feel good about himself. But read his reviews and ask yourself. Does it seem like he's trying to help? Or like he's trying to look like he's trying to help.
Longer explanation here:
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1211940/1
Seriously. All my work.