hmm a little better
but just like i said for the Prologue.Someone needs to take creative writing!
Reviews for "The Necromancer Episode 1"
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The voices sucked alot you should work on that i don't really care about the animation but other people won't like it also i could watch that like 6 times and wonder what is going on hope you fill me in on the next one
mmark-oldflash responds:
Thats the fun of this first ep. It just gives you a lot to think about and then I'll slowly reveal the story as the episodes go on. Patience.
I am douglas, hya hya hya hya hya
Start with the good. Everybodies voice acting was good, especially the random patrons and stable-keeper.
and the skull rip was cool
ok now that thats out of the way.
animation needs work, but it is difficult so not too much there.
How many times in one sentence can you use "revive the parthollian empire"? I will revive the parthollian empire so the parthollian empire will be built where the parthollian empire used to be..ok we get it.
" I made my bed...." cut the pause a little shorter there
should make the spells more dramatic, rather than listing what they are.
Douglas should be in your next one, he was cool. I am douglas, ha ha ha ha ha ha, stop moving ha ha ha ha....classic.
intro was the best part
sorry Ryoma, i couldn't finish watching it. needs some major reworking.
the "Reverse Damage" bit was where i had to stop watching.
the horse ranch guy was drawn pretty well, though.
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
the animation licked balls, and wats was wit u doing all the voices get someone else to help you or at least alter the voices. but over all it sucked.