good movie
you are a great story teller trapped in a semi-good animators body, i think this series will go places with the right amount of work put into it, i truly love these kind of fallen hero stories, i suggest you have a couple of friends help with the voices as well as with some of the animations(although some were good) and make the next episode an amazing contiuation of the plot, regardless, i still gave you a 5r, good job