It was ugly..
It's a fantastic story idea, and the plot seems good.. but the drawings are ugly; those must be the ugliest horses I've ever seen. Some of the dialogue was a bit rough too, like "ah, quit dodging me and face me like a man!"; he was swinging a damn axe at him, so what other choice was he left with (especially not having a weapon of his own, aside from spells)? Work on your art and it would be much better.