All right...
No, it wasn't bad, but it's definitely amateurish. All bad grammar aside, it's very obvious the writing was done by someone who doesn't know the first thing about good prose. I mean, swearing only works to enhance the grittiness of a story when it's used well. This movie, on the other hand, tends to overdo the language and essentially make the characters come off as a couple of kids sneaking swears in their treehouse.
The animation wasn't terrific, but it wasn't bad either. If it does indeed get better with later episodes, then it won't be a total loss.
The sounds need to be revamped though. Putting things on a loop gets annoying really fast.
Other than that, though, it was fairly decent. Keep at it.